Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Ode to a bear





A hungry big bear,
who wants to eat pear.


He wants to buy some, 
but cannot buy some.


He wants to get money,
but only finds bunny.


Poor poor bear, 
He cannot bear.

He desires to eat pear,
so he threatens other bear.

Oh, bear don't threaten bear,
Be so fair,
and farm and eat. 

emage origin : Naver Dictionary

3 comments:

  1. i can also feel that bear is poor and hungry....
    great pictures!!
    but there was something strange sentances...
    but it was cool!......

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  2. Who is that bear! The bear that eats pear? Your have such a interesting topic to write about. Although bear and pear were repetitively used, I liked the story that you created. You did good job on personifying the teddy bear. Next time, use different kind of vocabulary to add more variety! -TA Hyebin

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